Poem “Far”

Who’s star is that

with such a glow

One day I’ll reach it

when I’m not low

 

A star  I’ll be forever more

High I will be

If that is so

High I should be and never low

 

Sparkle threw the night

watch them sleeping tight

forever I’ll be with you

look to the sky, I’ll stay true

 

How you amaze me

little star

and just one wishwww.google.com

and I’ll go far

 

 

SOAPSTONE ANALYSIS

S comparison between the stars and the writers, they are similar because the writer desires what the stars have and the writer wishes and knows one day she will be as high self-esteem just like the height of the stars

O the speaker is wishing on a star and comparing how he would like to feel so high

Athe people who feel down that feel lonely

P there is always a chance in life and once your up high people will just look up to you just like we look up to the sky

S the writer is the speaker

TONE The writer feels calm,good about herself and confident and determine of her future goals.

 

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE  This poem written by me uses lots of rhyme it also uses allot of comparison between the star and the writer in the form that the writer compares herself to a shining star. I also use metaphor when it says “A star I’ll be forever more”  because instead of saying: Like a star I will be forever more I didn’t need to use the word like.

 

~ by jen1228 on May 9, 2008.

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